Foul language, bad spelling and religion are not usually good sales techniques...

All three of these things - naughty language, bad spelling and religion - were used on me the other day in some form of sales pitch. None of them worked.

The first was an email I received from someone overseas who was looking to network with other writers. He used some foul language in his introduction (in the form of a 4 letter word). Now, I might happen to be this informal among my very close friends, but it's in no way, shape or form appropriate in an introductory email to someone you've never met. I wasn't offended, but I was very put off by the tone it created and won't be responding to that email.

The second email was a solicitation to purchase some form of advertising. The advertising would involve placing my ad with another business' materials. But the name of this other business organization was spelled wrong by the sales person. Over and over. It reeks of un-professionalism that should not be present in a sales pitch.

The last one was the strangest (to me) and most controversial. Let me first say that my purpose here is only to present my view of how I see the business world. My blog is meant to describe how I do business - I'm sure there are others that would view this situation differently.

I received an email from an individual representing a business offering design and graphical services. These are services that I have paid other companies for in the past and it's something that (while I'm not looking for right now) I could possibly have use for in the future.

The email, however, touted the fact that this was a [Religion X] owned business. I thought that was very strange. The first thought that went through my head was "Who cares? What difference does it make?" It detracted significantly from the message of the business service they are trying to provide. I was a little offended - by the fact that this sales pitch was attempting to get me to use something private and personal that has nothing to do with my business to make a business decision.

Religion is a very touchy and personal subject with many people. So if one was going to use religion as a selling point, one first needs to determine if potential sales prospects also subscribe to ? What if I happened to belong to [Religion Y] which is at complete odds with [Religion X]. I might be so offended to the point of spreading negative word of mouth about that company.

One of the goals of selling, especially "cold call" selling is to connect with the customer. Announcing things like religion, politics and the like without knowing who you are talking to will most likely alienate prospects rather than connect with them.

At the end of the day, this kind of sales technique put me off working with that company because I'm not interested in purchasing any service from any organization because they are [Religion X] or [Religion Y] or [Religion Z] owned. It doesn't matter to me and in fact detracts from my desire to work with that organization. I'm interested in purchasing services from a business because they've demonstrated that they can provide a valuable service at a reasonable price.

The message in today's blog is this:

If you're attempting to sell and/or network, do so in the least controversial manner possible until you get to know the other person and build up a comfortable rapport. Err on the side of formality. Unless your politics or religion relate directly to the business you or your customers are in, leave your politics and religion at home. Be as professional with your pitch as possible - that includes watching your spelling and language.

A tip for developing your marketing pitch:

Before making the cold call, or sending the cold email, run your pitch by a couple friends or ideally, other business owners you know and can trust to give you honest feedback. Try to find people who will see it from a different point of view. Also, get other other eyes on your written materials - spelling mistakes aren't always caught by spell checkers.

Questions? Comments? I'm always curious to hear about experiences from other small business owners...